A rant

POETRY NEWS #4182
Date: 11/19/2012 at 02:01
From: Disciple Ayleth, of the First Order
To : Everyone
Subj: A rant


Despite your simple prose and thought scheme,
Your grammar does not match this simple theme.
To be honest, my dear, it is quite atrocious,
I find you are incredibly precocious.

You claim to be a voice for those who can't,
Yet all I see is a child's rant.
You're tired of being oppressed by your elders,
Yet your posts are all helter skelter.

How can you expect us to take you serious,
When all I think is that I am delirious,
That someone believes they know more,
Than those of us who have studied lore?

You cannot use words in the proper way,
So why should I listen to what you say?
Compared to Haidion, you're only a babe,
So hold back when your thoughts are made.

Remember this thought when you're being absurd:
Children should be seen and definitely not heard.
I would love to continue this poem,
But rhyming seems to fill me with woe.

Oh to hell with finding words that rhyme,
Sandwiches.


Penned by my hand on the 23rd of Ero, in the year 611 AF.